Thursday, August 23, 2012

Melville Intermediate - Writing with St Marys Room Six

Today as part of Room Eight's writing program we looked at the work from students from Room Six at St Marys School.  They have published original written narrative work based on the book 'Stray'.  They published it online on their wonderful class page.   We printed off two copies of their work for each of the four literacy groups at Room Five, Melville Intermediate School.   The students spent today viewing and reading the Room Six students narrative.   We then edited their work, reviewed it and responded to by leaving feedback to the students on their page.  This is currently a work in progress - not everyone from Room Five has responded to the Room Six students yet, but we are doing so over the next few school days.  To start viewing the collaboration you can click on the link to St Marys here.


  1. This is such a great project and will prepare you all so well for 100 Word Challenge when your work will receive comments from across the world!

  2. Great work guys!
    Did you enjoy the writing task?
    -Michaela, Room 6 St Mary's Mosgiel.